I found this video way cool. It requires a lot of planning, trial & error and patience.

Pretty much like writing your own story. May this inspire you to write a good story!

1) 2 letters are given today.

2) SA2 timetable and exam components for different subjects are found in the end-of-year examination letter.

3) A NIL return for Children's Day reply slip is required.

4) Please help to donate items listed in the letter and place them at the back of the classroom.

5) Let's help to share the joy of celebrating mooncake festival with others by donating $1 to the CIP fund.

6) There is no school on 18 and 21 September 2009.

Important Dates!

EL & CL Oral Exam - 28 & 29 Sept

SA2 EL Paper 1 (Sit. Writing and Compo) - 14 Oct

SA2 CL Paper 1 - 15 Oct

SA2 EL Paper 2 & LC - 26 Oct

SA2 Math - 27 Oct

SA2 CL Paper 2 & LC - 28 Oct

SA2 Science - 29 Oct

Parent-Teacher Meeting - 19 Nov

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Written by Israel, Reubin & Raphael

Victore was a drunken old man who had a lot of problems ,his worse problem was when he lost his job it all started last year where the boss fired him and stomped out of his office and started packing up with a few guards watching him . So he decided to drown his sorrow with many bottles of beer and when he got home his body was in his was in the worse condition anyone could have been, he was sweating all over and a reek of beer.

Then he went back to bed drunken. The next day, Victore started to feel woozy and went to his balcony and think that drinking more beer will help him stop his wooziness. After that, he was still sad about his job so his placed his beer bottle at the edge of the balcony window and quickly called his boss from his handphone in his pocket. However, Victore’s arm knocked the bottle down to the far ground. Down below the bottle there was Kirby, the ten year old boy who lived the same block as Victore, was running around. Kirby then got hit by the brittle bottle, smashed into pieces, Kirby’s voice shouted in pain until he could not see.

Tom, Anne and Jerry, saw the helpless Kirby crying on the floor with his head fill with reddish blood oozing out from his head. Tom, Anne and Jerry quickly called the police and the ambulance. In before five minutes, the ambulance and the police came to the rescue. By now, Victore was frozen solid in fear. He was so scared the he started to think what to do. Kirby was then in the hospital and Victore had made his last choice, he must tell the truth!

Victore went to the hospital and told Kirby that he was the one dropping the beer bottle accidentally. Then he was forgiven by Kirby and get fined by $200.

The End.

Written by Ekin

"Sorry Tim,you had lose your job,"said his boss sadly.Tim was a dishevelled-looking man.He has scruffy and jet-black hair.He did not bordered to do his work. His boss told him to pack his things immediately with security guards watching over him.When he left the place,he felt betrayed.He went to the pub to drown down his sorrows.

When he came back back from the pub,he felt really sick.He wanted to get rid of it,so he continue to drink.Suddenly,the sun rays shone brightly on him.He spilled beer onto his face in order to shield his eyes.He became frustrated and he put the beer bottle on the ledge of his corridor.While he was turning back,his elbow accidentally hit the beer bottle.Suddenly,he heard a loud bang coming from below his flat.He looked down and saw a passer-by was injured and blood was oozing out from his head.

"Should I help?Should I run away or should I hide?question were invading his mind.After much thinking,he decided to help the injured passer-by.He ran down as fast as the wind.A witness saw what had happen,he quickly called the ambulance and the police.

After a few minutes, the paramedics came and they placed the man on the stretcher.The police questioned Tim about the accident.Tim own up.He was fined and jailed.From there,Tim had learn a lesson not to drink when you are in troubled.

Written by Jun Jie

Tim was dishevelled looking man. He usually wore singlet and striped pants. He had scruffy jet black hair. He had lost his job because he always went out for late night party and he was always late for work. So he was sad that he went to buy a lot of beer to bring it back to his home.

The next day, Tim had a huge hang over and felt sick. To get rid of that feeling, he continued drinking beer from the beer bottle. He was trying to shield his eyes and spilled beer onto his face. When he was frustrated, he placed the beer bottle on the ledge of his corridor. Then he turned around to return to his flat. Suddenly, his elbow hit against the bottle. Seconds later, sound of shattered glass was heard. He quickly looked over and the scene at the bottom. Seemed unbeliever like one from a television drama. His trembling hands were sweaty. Tim saw the boy's head bleeding profusely. The sound of breaking glass attracted passers by. One of them quickly called the ambulance and police.

Within a few minutes the ambulance and police arrived. The paramedics came, placed victim on stretcher and attended to the boy's head injury immediately . The sent the boy to the hospital. The police came for investigation. Tim owned up and gave his statement. The police gave him a chance and warning him that never drink to drown sorrows again. Tim went to visit the boy is injured that the boy had survived the ordeal. So Tim got back his job. From that day onwards. He promised that accident will not happen again.

Written by Caleb, Jarell & Ewan

“What!” Tim screamed “I can’t be fired I’ve been working here my whole life!” The boss replied “I’m terribly sorry; it’s only because of the economic crisis I hope you don’t take it personally.” Tim stormed out of the room and headed for his desk .The boss sent two guards to make sure Tim didn’t steal any information about the company. There was a moment of silence followed by Tim shouting, “You’ll regret this!”

In Tim’s mind he felt like he had been betrayed; the boss had took his ideas the other day and now this was how the boss was ‘rewarding’ him? Tim went to a pub to sink his sorrows.

The next day Tim woke up finding himself sleeping in a pool of his own saliva. He suddenly felt a sharp pain in his head. He was dizzy, he felt like puking. To get rid of that feeling, he drank even more beer but to his dismay it just got worse. In a few seconds he found himself ‘talking’ to his plants. The sun shone brightly on his eyes, he tried to shield his eyes but ended up spilling beer on his face. Frustrated he placed the beer bottle on the ledge, as he turned; he accidently knocked the bottle off the ledge… …

In a split second, the sound of shattering glass followed by a piercing scream was heard, Tim froze. He knew what that meant; he could already see his life behind bars.

Should he help?
Should he not?
Should he hide?

Not knowing if his decision was right, he went to help. Tim ran unsteadily down, he could see an unconscious boy on the floor with shattered glass all over. A passerby called the police and ambulance. There was huge commotion as the paramedics and police arrived. Even before police started their investigation Tim turned himself in. As an act of negligence Tim had a jail term of ten months.

Tim learnt that he should not drink to drown his sorrows but stay positive and move on.

THE END
(To be continued………………………………Immediately)

A few weeks after his jail term, Tim’s boss was arrested for fraud felony. Tim’s new job was helping people like himself that had been laid off to get a new job.
THE END

Written by Jeddy and Joshua Wong CW

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